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a by product of watching suicide club and hating my clay sculpting teacher.
you can crit but not on the shoulders/feet because oh my god wtf is wrong with them. detail: [link] Comments
your digital is very nice. very clean.
as for critique, the torso in relation to the rest of the body is too large. If you were to widen up the legs or make the rib cage smaller it'd look more in proportion. and his hip area is almost non-existent. I'd suggest making that area more distinct. and one more thing; the curve of the body looks awkward. his upper body looks like it's at an angle while his lower half is facing forwards. the face is awesome. gorgeous with the strokes and the choice of skin tone. ahhh, i love the mask. very creepy/cool/creative
i haet giving crits (bad, bad responses in the past OTL), so i'll just give you ~*~DOPE~*~ compliments on the coloring, especially on the face. love your digital~ ~otaku-muffin and me watched suicide club and were u-uhhh very confused. the beginning was the best, and the mom cutting off her fingers in front of her kid. but still 'wtf'. those are some nice lips
you may not agree, but i find that disproportion holds something in a style. i mean, the people i draw are practically sticks and sometimes i'll stretch a certain part of the figure for it to be visibly appealing to me, while others might find it a bit odd. i'm rambling a ramble that's incredibly rambly. my apologies... omg the coloring is so awesome. especially on the lips.
I like the folds on the knees of the pants too. -- sketch blog: [link] |
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