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a by product of watching suicide club and hating my clay sculpting teacher.

you can crit but not on the shoulders/feet because oh my god wtf is wrong with them.

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:iconfayetts:
your digital is very nice. very clean.

as for critique, the torso in relation to the rest of the body is too large. If you were to widen up the legs or make the rib cage smaller it'd look more in proportion. and his hip area is almost non-existent. I'd suggest making that area more distinct.
and one more thing; the curve of the body looks awkward. his upper body looks like it's at an angle while his lower half is facing forwards.


the face is awesome. gorgeous with the strokes and the choice of skin tone.
:iconminicow:
aahaa his shirt is baggy, so that's not the actual size of his torso, it's the shirt. i guess it looks too tight around the chest area though. and yeah, you're right about the angle being off.

thank you :heart:
:iconaquaticfishy:
This is really cool. I love the colors and all the trippy concepts, especially the hair.

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98% of teenagers do watch or have watched House. If you're one of the 2% who hasn’t, paste your FACE to a wall.
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ooh I love the coloring and the falling letters!

except i think it would make more sense if the letters were falling in front of him instead of a little bit behind him
:iconjaba-nonsense:
ahhh, i love the mask. very creepy/cool/creative
i haet giving crits (bad, bad responses in the past OTL), so i'll just give you ~*~DOPE~*~ compliments on the coloring, especially on the face. love your digital~

~otaku-muffin and me watched suicide club and were u-uhhh very confused. the beginning was the best, and the mom cutting off her fingers in front of her kid. but still 'wtf'.
:iconsixti4:
those are some nice lips

you may not agree, but i find that disproportion holds something in a style.
i mean, the people i draw are practically sticks and sometimes i'll stretch a certain part of the figure for it to be visibly appealing to me, while others might find it a bit odd.

i'm rambling a ramble that's incredibly rambly.
my apologies...
:iconautumnovertures:
I actually like the feet.
They're cute and the shoes are beyond rad.
Holy mother of god, look at the detail on the face!

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we're gonna see how loud you scream...
:iconxlightsoutx:
omg the coloring is so awesome. especially on the lips.
I like the folds on the knees of the pants too.

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sketch blog: [link]

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